Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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21.8.18
Hi, my name is Rory Quayle and I am student at
Ohaeawai Primary School. I really like how you did the solar system. I like the facts you wrote.
It made me think about the stars at night .
Have you thought about telling people more information about your learning?
Tena Koe, Ella,i’m Hannah from Marshland School, I liked how you presented some of the different planets in the solar system. When I read your post I learnt about some of the different planets. Maybe next time you could add some more planets like Mercury, Venus, Jupiter, and Uranus.
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