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Friday, August 3, 2018

Ella &Chelsey spaceship

5 comments:

  1. This is amazing because it is creative.
    Did you know I like the chelsey spaceship.
    Next time, you could add more detail to the background.
    Why did you make it?

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  2. Hi my name is Sienna and I go to Ohaeawai School. I really like your rocket with the bright stars and your beautiful face in the rocket. I would like to hear more about your things and who you are and I love the heart on the top.

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  4. Hi Ella, I liked the way you put bright colours into your work
    Did you know i like bright colours as well
    Next time, you could make something new!
    from Lila And Brooke.

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  5. Kia Ora Ella.
    I am Greer from Marshland School, I loved your amazing rocket ship, keep up the great work, I love how you have added stars all around, exactly like space. maybe next time try making sure the stars don’t bunch up together and touch, so they are spread out

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