Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, August 3, 2018
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
This is amazing because it is creative.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like the chelsey spaceship.
Next time, you could add more detail to the background.
Why did you make it?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sienna and I go to Ohaeawai School. I really like your rocket with the bright stars and your beautiful face in the rocket. I would like to hear more about your things and who you are and I love the heart on the top.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ella, I liked the way you put bright colours into your work
ReplyDeleteDid you know i like bright colours as well
Next time, you could make something new!
from Lila And Brooke.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ella.
I am Greer from Marshland School, I loved your amazing rocket ship, keep up the great work, I love how you have added stars all around, exactly like space. maybe next time try making sure the stars don’t bunch up together and touch, so they are spread out